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Sea Life in the Bottle

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:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star-empty::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

Very nice concept and work. But it need some minor improvements.

Vision:
It looks very cool in thumbnail. Beautiful work.
Blue color of water is popping out from the background. It gives very nice look.

Originality:
Concept of this image is very good. Due to seashore in background, it looks very original.

Technique:
Technically it need some improvements. Cutout of glass, female model and water surface of glass, etc. are clearly visible. It should be done with minute details.
Glass: There is two water surface. Glass is fully filled with pure (transparent) water and later you have added another surface of (blue) water. Female model over glass is not placed properly.
Bottle: crab doesn't seems in bottle. It need color correction.
By the way, technically good thing is (seashore)background. Blurred background gives depth-of-field.

Impact:
Table surface, where bottle and glass are kept, gives aliveness to composition. And also it is near seashore, which identifies sea life which gives very good look and leaves good impact.

Overall, your works is very beautiful and eye catchy... <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s…" width="15" height="15" alt=":-)" title=":-) (Smile)"/>
Keep it up. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/t/t…" width="15" height="15" alt=":thumbsup:" title="Thumbs Up"/>